5…6…7…8 my teacher counts us off and then we are off and smiling for days and adding our style and attitude, dance is the freedom of style and emotions.
When I am sad or having a bad day I want school to be over so I can go to dance to cheer me up. For example when I have had a lot of tests or quiz’s that day I like to freely show my emotion and feeling through my dancing, especially lyrical. because, when
There are so many different types of dance so, you can freely choose to be sassy, sad, fierce or graceful. For example when I am tap dancing I still do the steps we are supposed to do but, I add my own sass, unlike ballet where I am more graceful and focused on detail.
Dancing really helps me be me and not who people tell me to be. Therefore that’s why dance is freedom.
That is a great piece of writing. I like how you explain when you use techniques and when you put some of your own style into it.
I love this expository because it says a lot about you. It helps me understand so well by using great examples I am not even a dancer and reading about how tap dance makes you feel sassy makes me want dance and go all tap dancer in my pink socks. XD I think that choosing something you know A LOT about makes your writing awesome because I can feel so much passion when I read this. Keep up the great work!!! 😉
I loved how you showed and didn’t just tell why dance is freedom, you also told us how many and what the types of dance are. That’s awesome good job!
This expository is one of the best I’ve heard. You had great word choice! I have a thing that cheers me up when I’m down too!