Standing in the sizzling, summer, sun
Tiny droplets of lake water slowly trickling down my face
Fun
Family
Food
Having the time of my life
Nothing could stop me
Then it hit me
Pounding
Sharp
Pain
A bee has just stung me
My eyes begin to fog up
Tears trickle down my cheeks
A bee has stung me
The fun has stopped
I like what you did with parallel structure here, Nina: fun/family/food and pounding/sharp/pain. Very impressive! Then you have another three lines of narration after that. Well done.